I have often found the industry standard of reviews which simply unpack (an exhibition) as routinely dull as this, so it is definitely is good writing by the standards of what gets published. And as always currently, it is a bit overlong, wordy. Judgment on when to end a sentence, a paragraph, a piece, requires some meta-processes not (yet) available. Its boringly accurate because of a lack of judgment, even if completely wrong.
PS thanks for ruining a favourite work of mine, there are not many left.
I have often found the industry standard of reviews which simply unpack (an exhibition) as routinely dull as this, so it is definitely is good writing by the standards of what gets published. And as always currently, it is a bit overlong, wordy. Judgment on when to end a sentence, a paragraph, a piece, requires some meta-processes not (yet) available. Its boringly accurate because of a lack of judgment, even if completely wrong.
PS thanks for ruining a favourite work of mine, there are not many left.